can you go through this again. i made some edits but thinking i was changing the meaning. you're a little jargony and your sentences need to be shorter / split up.
thx alan o.
can you go through this again. i made some edits but thinking i was changing the meaning. you're a little jargony and your sentences need to be shorter / split up.
thx alan o.
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